Thursday, November 17, 2005

The Ghost Comments

Rating: 4.5

I sit and watch, in awe of you,
for you, you must be a creation of the Gods.
Your long, silken hair,
glistens in the silvery light of the moons night shadow,
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Steve Armstrong
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Carolyn (Cy) Vuletic 21 November 2005

Your imagery in this poem is amazing, I got sucked right in! This is one of my favorites. Carolyn.

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Vanessa Brown 17 November 2005

you really are a talented writer! your poetry is so breathtakingly beautiful, the images you use are amazing: Your long, silken hair, glistens in the silvery light of the moons night shadow, i like that line a lot! ! i also like the way you relate beauty to mortality..its interesting! good work, im a big fan!

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