I sit and watch, in awe of you,
for you, you must be a creation of the Gods.
Your long, silken hair,
glistens in the silvery light of the moons night shadow,
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you really are a talented writer! your poetry is so breathtakingly beautiful, the images you use are amazing: Your long, silken hair, glistens in the silvery light of the moons night shadow, i like that line a lot! ! i also like the way you relate beauty to mortality..its interesting! good work, im a big fan!
Your imagery in this poem is amazing, I got sucked right in! This is one of my favorites. Carolyn.