Thursday, July 27, 2006

The Ghost Comments

Rating: 5.0

The things you hide
Behind the beautiful mask of your lies
Keep me trapped here; forgotten
Behind a thousand locked doors of our yesterday
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Lesa MRK
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Night Hawk 27 July 2006

10 is not good enough for that one, excellent poem

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Brian Dorn 27 July 2006

'For you left youself behind... leaving me in shadows.' Absolutely great ending, Lesa! Really well done! ! Brian

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