Wednesday, August 21, 2013

The Gentleman On A Park Bench Comments

Rating: 4.3

I spied him on a park bench, my how happy he did seem
As contented as a sleeping man within a pleasant dream
So full of equanimity, so tranquil and refined
Obviously no distress disturbed his state of mind
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Richard Lackman
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Bri Edwards 27 June 2017

loved it again. now it will be [your name and a link to the poem's page] in my/our July 2017's 'a showcase for and by PH poets', found in my list of PH poems under: July 2017's. Thanks. bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 23 June 2015

to MyPoemList, where it will probably sit until my biographer looks at it! ! bri :)

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Bri Edwards 23 June 2015

beautiful. i was thinking at first that 'you'/the speaker were/was a bit............. 'selfish'? 'dissatisfied with life'? a sightless man helped you to see the light! i assume you made this all up. i liked the rhyming. nice work. bri :)

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Alec Latha 09 September 2013

with little eye i spie the gentle man on the bench

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