Tuesday, October 7, 2008

The Gentle Smile Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am amused
At the gentle smile
You always hold
On your rodomont face.
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Harish k. Thakur
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 September 2009

I am amused At the gentle smile You always hold On your rodomont face. it is good sign and welcoming too... it can be termed and aresult into first sight love... it adds to beauty too.. altogether fine piece....10 read mine love at first sight.... mary to marry

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Seema Chowdhury 12 October 2008

such a lovely poem. really enjoyed.

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Bonnie Collins 09 October 2008

Very warmly penned with alot of tenderness and imagry....Very good.. Bonnie

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Aiswarya. T.anish 08 October 2008

Soooo Gentle! Keep writing...

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Anjali Sinha 08 October 2008

a perfect analogy of the gentle smile and the fair fingers of your host ---a lovely dinner -candlelit maybe 'The fair fingers of your lady Spice the dinner well.' Harish nice poem and +10 to you. regards anjali

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Ashraful Musaddeq 08 October 2008

Amazing composition. A nice piece.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 08 October 2008

Very beautiful poem.....heart-warming piece.

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