Sunday, October 12, 2014

The Gems Comments

Rating: 2.5

My eyes long to meet you, everytime I think of those golden days you gifted us.

The days when waking up for a new day was as exciting as opening a gift.
Going to school was like logging in a networking site
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Anupa Subramanian
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Khairul Ahsan 05 April 2020

Whom have you written this poem about?

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Sunil Nair 14 October 2014

Good one. But then, the beginning was very shaky and out of place. The poem starts to flow from the 5th stanza onwards. But then again you move out of context, from home...to parents.

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Anupa Subramanian

Anupa Subramanian

Mumbai, India
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