Thursday, November 16, 2017

The Gelly Haired Head Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh, sweat droplets
From your gelly haired
Big head
A real treat
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Anjandev Roy 28 October 2019

Beautifully depicted. Thank u, dear poetess.anjandev roy.

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Prabir Gayen 04 September 2019

Oh, sweat droplets From your gelly haired Big head A real treat To all the flies That hover over Your head.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 August 2019

A fun little poem, dear ate Rose...10+++

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Prabir Gayen 20 July 2019

Oh, , sweat droplets From your gelly haired Big head A real treat To all the flies That hover over Your head.... very sweet

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 July 2019

Oh, sweat droplets....the delicacy in this address makes this poem endearing! My pleasure revisiting this beautiful work!

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Red Peters 24 April 2019

Loved this humorous poem.

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Prabir Gayen 23 April 2019

Oh, sweat droplets From your gelly haired Big head A real treat To all the flies That hover over Your head.... beautiful

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 April 2019

A real treat To all the flies That hover over Your head. interesting and funny. thank u dear poetess. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 August 2018

A poem with haunting expression that attracts to read over and over again. Well done.

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 August 2018

images......... your head. gelly haired, , bees over your head.. fine imagination..... dear poetess. it is a great ability to imagine......... tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 July 2018

A real treat To all the flies That hover over Your head........so amusing. A beautiful interesting poem shared amazingly.10

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Robert Murray Smith 26 April 2018

A jelly hared cocoction has underneath a jelly brain. ++10

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A fascinating comment, Robert. Thank you for your visit and time.

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Mr. Mister 10 April 2018

Now I know, I don't have to use gelly. Interesting poem. Liked it.

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Glad you liked it. Thank you for your visit.

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Akhtar Jawad 15 March 2018

Interesting poem, enjoyed it.

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Glad you liked it, Akhtar. Thank you.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 February 2018

A short and sweet poem......Thanks for sharing.....10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 February 2018

A nice comment, Dr. Dillip. Thank you.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 January 2018

That hover over! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 January 2018

Thanks for the visit and comment, Edward.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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