Thursday, September 17, 2015

The Geckos, Please Keep Your Tails! ! Comments

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my companion of memories, the Geckos,
live everywhere here, not as solos,
stuck on my heart wall, as the posters,
cushioned vacuum created in mid air,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 17 September 2015

A female's harsh warning call threatens. The male's mating call sounds either like a bird's melody or chirps. Listen to a lizard sing. Gecko calls, courtesy of Greg Christenson, Julie Bergman, Brian Nelson and Kandice Barna.Jul 10,2006 the noise of lizard is explained differently in different literature. After a bit of research I have selected chirping and croaking, as I used to hear them doing these kinds of music. Thank you Padma for the lovely comment..

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Padma Devkota 17 September 2015

Strange syntax as in chirping of them and croaking of them is a bit jarring. The unity of life expressed in the last line is good.

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