Wednesday, November 26, 2008

The Gauntlet Comments

Rating: 4.8

What is this gauntlet of a man,
This state of being I must rise to?
I stand before it pale and wan,
What, makes a man of me or you?
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Alexander Steen Stewart
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Roshni D'Souza 29 April 2009

Another brilliant piece...will read more as time permits. You certainly do not disappoint! Thanks, roshni.

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C.Lynn Ferguson 26 November 2008

This is beautiful as well Alexander. Such eloquence! I especially love the final verse. C

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Fay Slimm 26 November 2008

This piece has a nice flow Alex and has a certain 'Donnish' air about it too - I like the questions and the supposed answers given in the verses..... a good solid contribution, and keep writing......10 from Fay.

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Anjali Sinha 26 November 2008

'In The Garden he made she, Two halves of one whole. So man cannot a full man be, Till woman plays her role.' wowwww! ! ! ! ! such eloquence great write---keep sharing anjali (do read some of mine)

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Alexander Steen Stewart

Alexander Steen Stewart

Falkirk, Central Scotland
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