The Gathering Comments

'Who I am; Who are we is the same query and the answer is for both: both are we and each is I for all is multiples; and revelation; there is no Universal Rule of Consistency; we live with multiplicities. ' hey last stanza is splendid friend...this is in most ways kinda inspirational write... First few stanzas are very free flowing and smooth.. then you provide the reader with highly unexpected ending.. I liked the way you change the tone of the poem.. And this in most ways good for me.. cause I ask these questions all the time! ! ! who am I? ? This in most ways enjoyable and meaningfull poem indeed love shan

A very beautiful and meaningful poem of unique ideas of time, space and multiplicities.............10/10.