~the Gate Keepers~ Comments

Aloha E... Yes Sir EEEEEck... this tis the hist... that I am suggesting a boffing-a- bout... magic and tragedy... or tragedy magi-eyed! got ya grift on this post... I believe in musically challenged word wrighting... and I have the post of our continued mingling thoughts, verbs, nouns, and internals... message received... and upended! I'd toss in another ten, but then redaction would add erasure' qualities to this mixed race to the end of humanity... in so many words or less... great write my brother wright! All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two.

through these eyes I see life and death that is a lot to see a beautifully written poem great imagery

I have to agree with Mr.Daniel Brick. Your imagery and figurative language are amazing and they both really compliment each other and create a stunming poem. Amazing job!

This is pure Art! If you can travel beyond the unimaginable and feel it to the core, while not knowing exactly what is it that, that you feel, then the poet has achieved the highest level in its craft! Magnificent Write! This poem is my favourite of yours.

This poem has qualities I admire in a poem. The figurative language is highly fused, metaphors are scattered throughout the literal descriptions, the imagery is detailed, the tone is impersonal but not unfeeling. Despite all of these excellent aspects of craft, I have no idea what the poem is saying. I've read it multiple times but all I can register are those qualities I listed. It's the old problem of THE FOREST or THE TREES? ? If you could give me your sense of purpose, or the gist, in a line or two, I think I could see beyond the trees for the forest.

This poem is amazing, truly amazing and it like... Catches your mind in that web! Awesome write!