The Garrulous Din Comments

Congratulations Dear Poet Indira. This powerful poem is ranked #93 among the Best Member Poems on PoemHunter today. Fantastic achievement. All the best, dear poet.

A heart-rending poem. A vivid depiction of domestic abuse and never-ending sadness and difficulties on the part of a wife. A well expressed poem.

A poignant poem depicting a nagging and abusive husband written with deep insight. A highly relatable experience. Thanks for sharing this brilliant creation of yours with us, madam.

Beautifully worded poem Mam.

Power of emotions and creativity combined so well what the poet wants to express. five + for this one.

She needs to survive. Must learn to leave all such noices behind. A page out of many a life

Great expression......thanks for sharing...

I love the poem in general but the ending is very powerful

A sad poem. Yeah her suffering has no end. She must be feeling like dead. Nice write.

A difficult subject to talk to her husband about. Perhaps if she invited her female friends around when he's there and she can gossip with them to annoy him? ? ? Good poem Indira.