i like this alot, the tone is nice.
when you say ' watch as she walks, see how she removes, ' causes one to try to visualize her actions, lots of imagery :)
'See how she turns her weathered
face to the warming sun:
a lover’s kiss.' is very sweet, as if we have walked in on a most intimate moment.
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i like this alot, the tone is nice. when you say ' watch as she walks, see how she removes, ' causes one to try to visualize her actions, lots of imagery :) 'See how she turns her weathered face to the warming sun: a lover’s kiss.' is very sweet, as if we have walked in on a most intimate moment.