Friday, March 31, 2006

The Garden Of My Grave Comments

Rating: 5.0

As a small boy,
I would dig in the earth
With my father.
For him, it was a small garden
...
Read full text

Uriah Hamilton
COMMENTS
Hugh Cobb 31 March 2006

Dear Uriah, This is a lovely but sad poem. The conciseness and clean lines make it easier for the reader to partake of the greater depths in the poem's heart. Good writing. Best, Hugh

0 0 Reply
Mary Nagy 31 March 2006

What a sad poem Uriah. It really breaks my heart to think you've felt such sadness even as a young boy. Great write........heartwrenching though. Sincerely, Mary

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success