Monday, April 22, 2013

The Garden Of Loneliness Comments

Rating: 5.0

We met in the garden of loneliness,
After crossing the bridge of despair,
We drank from the fountain of hopelessness,
How much torment must our hearts bear?
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Lora Colon
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Jak Black 29 December 2015

A very beautiful poem, Lora. Beautiful but so very sad. I'm sure each word, each line would touch a raw nerve with anyone who has spent some time in that garden.

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Ovi Odiete 20 July 2015

Sorrowful, but hopefull still.... Enthralling.

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Steve Ricketts 28 December 2013

Wow Lora, such a sad poem, I felt every word you wrote. I've tried to vote on it but must be doing something wrong, I just love the way your words flow, it's almost hearing you say them. Thank you. Steve.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

Missouri - United States
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