The Garden Of Heaven Comments
A river that ran as lucid as air
And the fish in it like gold and hoary
The flowers like a fiery orange flame
Nourished well by the water
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This poem is a beautiful picture of Paradise and by far my favorite of all I've read that you have written. If life could be like the images and the thoughts that you convey then we would all have Heaven on Earth.Splendid and very uplifting.I gave you a ten. One little pointer in English all proper nouns begin with a capital letter.A noun is the name of a person, place or thing-as I learned it.Cupid is the Roman name of the love god and should be capitalised.Everything else is fantastic.Good work! ! ! !
A garden not beyond our grasp, if we but learned to consider each other as equally worthy dwellers there.
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7/23/2025 8:22:37 AM # 1.0.0
You are really gifted as a writer this poem is beautiful. well done.