cascading water
of a mini waterfall,
giggles over the slope,
unmanageable,
...
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This is picturesque ritty. I like 'giggles' over the slope and the descriptive words for your miniature world. It sounds very lovely. 10 love Karin
RITTY, I have gone through all the seven poems mentioned. You have expressed you poetic thoughts through beautiful imagery of Nature and the garden! I had previously commented on four of them! Hope you liked my comments? With best wishes, -Raj