Thursday, May 12, 2011

The Gap Between Meeting And Engagement Comments

Rating: 5.0

The eyes they did meet,
not those that do not see,
but the sight that reveal.
The heart of hearts which hides deep,
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Arwa Bharmal
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Mozafar Ali 13 May 2011

:) really good, you got talent keep them coming!

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 12 May 2011

Nice poem. Rich in depth and imagery. Beautifully conceived. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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Arwa Bharmal

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