Monday, January 12, 2009

The Games You Play Comments

Rating: 5.0

You know you hold it
The key to my heart
And that gives you the power
To keep us together
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Brianna Trombley
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Kesav Easwaran 21 April 2009

good options you offer...and these options are for you too, to consider, Brianna...a loving heart tied on thread to a cunning rubber ball... good work...10

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, , , , , , 18 January 2009

oooh i love this one all meaningful and beautiful but kinda sad

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Kimber Harrison 17 January 2009

It's really good! Who knows how many people can relate to this! It's really really good.

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Zachary Jessell 17 January 2009

i liked this...but its sad because thats not the tape of man anyone should have in there life haha its deep

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Shagun Khera 12 January 2009

Beautiful poem....truely heartfelt...

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Marvin Brato 12 January 2009

B eing in love r isk you will take i n life's existence a thing or two may not be perfect n ow the time to realize n othing stays forever a t least you learn your lessons!

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Brianna Trombley

Brianna Trombley

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