Saturday, January 25, 2020

The Game Of Some Comments

Rating: ★5.0

Oh! baby you're so fine
you make me feel so good
you're my love, my angel
Be mine, lets fly!
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Luz H.
baby fly
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Kesav Easwaran 26 January 2020

Either a prelude or a follow up to your 'Scorpion' poem. Well written piece Luz. Much determination displayed there 10+

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Kostas Lagos 25 January 2020

A sadistic, selfish game.Well written

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Luz Hanaii 25 January 2020

Kostas, at times God uses these narcissists to teach us self worth & self love. Thank you for reading and commenting.

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