Thursday, November 12, 2015

The Game Of Silence Comments

Rating: 4.2

Its three days since the game started,
But it feels forever unlike i anticipated,
Upon the imposed distance we have adjusted,
But a sense of touch is why this i jolt,
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Peter Karweru
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peter karweru 04 December 2015

It is an honor to have you identify with the words and experience of this writer. Love is pure ecstasy that flows within and from us to that another person. Even when the ambience is sad, expressing the feeling makes me glad. thank you for sharing you poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON, great piece check my review on it.

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Chinedu Dike 24 November 2015

Beautiful depiction of the mighty experience of love, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. An insightful portrayal of a voyage of pure bliss that is love, which affects all and sundry with overwhelming spiritual force. Thanks for sharing Peter. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 13 November 2015

It doesn't sound fun. Thanks, Peter

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peter karweru 04 December 2015

There was no absolute excitement while writing this piece, only spasms of great torment.Thanks for reading through it Kelly.

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