Monday, July 16, 2012

The Game Of Love Comments

Rating: 4.8

Just a player
in a game
collecting hearts
his claim to fame
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Dee Corpolongo
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Chinedu Dike 15 July 2015

Love is a spiritual experience that affects all and sundry profoundly. It could become extremely dangerous to turn this overwhelming experience into a game that could leave one perpetually hurt. I like the articulation and rhyme scheme of the poem. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Patricia Grantham 22 February 2014

A lovely poem Dee and very short and sweet. Two can play but only one can really win. Just play the game well. Good.

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Dee Corpolongo

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