Thursday, June 12, 2008

The Game Of Life Comments

Rating: 4.5

Life is a game
Some strife for fortune and fame
Others struggle to get by
others live think life as nothing more than a sigh
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Neil Crosby
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Demon lover 26 December 2008

Very True About Life Now A Days

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Kesav Easwaran 18 December 2008

a matured write...admirable considering your young age...let us live the excitements of the present...well done, Neil...10

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lila uzamkui 27 September 2008

life is not a game, it may be a nightmare full of pain but its not a game... if it was a game, then life would be shame... people and crying a child is always crying, but this is not a game, theres too much pain for life to be put into one game

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Harley Marie 22 June 2008

this is a really good poem as well... i love the game factor all though my game is nearly ended... you are so good...

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