Friday, June 12, 2015

The Game Maker Comments

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From his lavish throne, by the screen,
He watches his players play,
And as they stand tall in his devious land,
The game maker smirks at his innocent preys...
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Rutvi Padhy
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 13 June 2015

Woah extraordinary abstract and sublime. Mystery game maker, and in many stanzas the rhyming is praiseworthy. Thumbs up. Pls do review my latest poem too.

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Rutvi Padhy 13 June 2015

thnxx for reading n appreciating my poem, n i'll sure check out ur poem; -)

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