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A real nice poem, Rose. I have written something for people with a broken heart. I do not know whether it is suitable to put it here, but I still. do: Deceived, a heart full of hurt Bitter and hard, Hatred burning A flood of tears Will the tide ever be turning? Even though your heart, he has been destroying Life seems so nice to him, he is still enjoying. You are alone, all alone with a heart full of hurt You shout it out loud, but remain unheard. Through all the hatred you find in your heart the suffering and pain becomes worse You want peace, but where do you start, All you are is bitter, hateful. You curse When we pray for help and support from above For the one who had lost all love, the idea of forgiving seems to grow stronger. We do not want to hate for much longer Once we can forgive in our heart grief starts to fall apart. Tears may come back on and off But we become able to live, love and laugh When we decide that we want to keep hatred so strong We will continue to hurt and be bitter all along.

now that was really something awesome.. very nice Rose..you're poems are getting too good day by day. now all you need to do is, keep the flame red. :)