Monday, June 24, 2013

The Girl Beside Nile Comments

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have you seen the girl
beside river Nile?
raindrops on her feet,
i dont know who she is.
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JENIE FRANKSAY
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Unwritten Soul 24 June 2013

Ah it sounds nice, you can make many new moves in poetry, this one just a big step...! ! greater in the future_Soul

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~ Jenie~ 24 June 2013

i love this poem so amazing and moving too

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Survi Sharma 24 June 2013

seventh standard./ thats great wow..gud luck at that standard...i even cnt think anything like poetry great verse so touching you portryed the girl in a nice manner greatly written

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Vishal Sharma 24 June 2013

nice image created nile river, you may use ganga or hoogly ha ha ha

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