have you seen the girl
beside river Nile?
raindrops on her feet,
i dont know who she is.
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seventh standard./ thats great wow..gud luck at that standard...i even cnt think anything like poetry great verse so touching you portryed the girl in a nice manner greatly written
nice image created nile river, you may use ganga or hoogly ha ha ha
Ah it sounds nice, you can make many new moves in poetry, this one just a big step...! ! greater in the future_Soul