## The G O O D B Y E Comments

A grand prix au revoir with bosoming-in in the inn everybody. Perfect chime for ten Sir Ms. Nivedita Cordially invite read and comment on my poems niv

wow! a great master piece, of reflection amongst us.....of what is reality in today’s world......a deep and bonding connect of what life amidst the evolution of time, such a genuine heart rays the truth of what will be the next pages of our life....excellent view of a lifetime...thank you and God bless...a 10 +++

you never cease to amaze, Sarwar. this is full of poetic wisdom, turn a lot of cliche on their head. love for animate and inanimate things- a comparative study. impressive and very creative

original and imaginative...thanks...10

..love is the cause, life the effect …..love to love, not to love in fact! .....................quite passionate as we bid farewell at finale, heartfelt rocking tunes,10+++, thanks for sharing

You are very original and creative

Great poem from you. A heart felt poem too I feel too young to say goodbye now Well penned Thanks for sharing with me

Lovely write Sarwar....just hope that this is not a final goodbye to PH......

practice love to get the Love …..things move see down to above. Rachel Ann Butler

oh, Great poem from a great poet hey this is heart felt poem lovely piece heartfelt for real luwi

hi sarwar Eid mubarak, thanks for sharing this poem. pl remember you are too young to say goodbye now. we all care for you and want to see you happy. your words are very nice and flows naturally into its place. i enjoyed reading it but goodbyes are always painful. while we are here let us enjoy all that God Almighty has created for us. take care i wrote some new poems if time permits see them on pg1,2 & 3.

While reading your write I was recalling my own write on same subject with almost same title(farewell) . Well your expression on this subject was real lengthy but worthy. Sensitivity write.

Fats Domino sings: 'You made me cry, when you said goodbay, ain't that a shame..'.

Excellent descriptive, symbolistic poem, very well expressed.Thank you for sharing. 10++++++++++

very nice and beautiful write...........

a heartfelt way of expressing gratitude to all aspects of life..

Nice kind of poem to read! Best wishes!

wow fanastic this nature poem is so gd kept it up 10++

I suppose dreams can be confusing, they usually are all mixed up. I agree with Patrick not much of nature left out. But an interesting dream on paper a poem of some delight. Thank you. regards Bob

I wont let u disappear so soon.....But its a thought too different, yes ofcourse only dreams can give birth to such musing......eventually the way u have rendered ur farewell note is wonderful! ! ! ! ! ! !