Friday, May 21, 2010

The G-Force Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am beginning to sense the beginning of this.
What is this? This is like, you know, uh,
Well, it is the same motion that kicked off at the dawn,
Me moaning,
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Sayantan Dutta
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Abstract poem… ‘…While an entire spasm of ecstasy being transferred seamlessly via organic sieves, /Five discordant rookies basking with their butts held high in lofty esteem…’ Metaphor with ‘at odds’…rookies [? 5 primordial elements] behave such bizarre in lofty esteem…and poetically very apt… 10. Ms. Nivedita UK

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