Saturday, August 29, 2009

The Future's Request Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm a child who's not yet born
Hoping for mercy
For a sunrise sight
Not a land of calamity
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Lorena Lalen Cruz
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Ted M 30 August 2009

Yeah! Our future generations deserve a clean unpolluted environment. You have done a good job, looking at it through the eyes of an unborn.. Nice creativity..10

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Pamela Jokerst 29 August 2009

I love the title. It alone held such promise of something profound or insightful and that is what your poem delivers. Excellent job delivering a difficult but needed message.

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