Monday, August 21, 2006

The Future Mrs.Bling- Fun Comments

Rating: 4.8

Now this lady she parades round her shopping mall
She admires herself as she stands strong and tall
She window shops the jewellers but doesnt buy a thing
But somehow comes home all kitted out in Bling
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Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson
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M Asim Nehal 17 January 2017

This is fantastic poem, Thanks for sharing.

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Jerry Hughes 23 August 2006

Welcome back Lisa, and with an imaginative poem to boot. Well done...

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Alison Cassidy 23 August 2006

Lisa, great ot have you back in form... And what great form it is! Fascinating story cleverly told. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Sylvia Spencer 22 August 2006

My own dear Lisa This is just one hundred gold bars a bullion of a poem I just loved it Cheers Sylviex

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Sandra Fowler 21 August 2006

What a fascinating story! Cheers for your rich imagination. I love both the imagery and atmosphere of this piece. And it ends with just the right ironic twist of fate. Excellent, Lisa. Love, Sandra

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Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson

Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson

Northumberland, England
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