Thursday, January 24, 2013

The Future In The Eyes Of A Boy Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's the firing line-
I have to decide; which way shall i go?
I'm tired- i try-
It's no option to die; my boots heavily drenched in snow
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Anela Mrubata
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Yasmin Khan 18 February 2013

Your poem delivers a cherished message of humanity....peace. The auditory Imagery sets the scene for your theme.

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