Tuesday, July 3, 2012

The Future Comments

Rating: 3.7

It seemed just like yesterday
When I, my head came out the womb;
When I, my knee walked the house;
Till my feet stood
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Hezekiah Tiamiyu
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Unwritten Soul 03 July 2012

Special way you use here to recall life since born to who you are now, bringing positive to stay alive with you even in this poetry, I think you did a great job, i love the style especially a simple word Ta-ta, Ma-ma....and how you pull all meaning to fit as one, with very bright conclusion...10! _Unwritten Soul

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Hezekiah Tiamiyu

Hezekiah Tiamiyu

Lagos state, Nigeria
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