Thursday, December 18, 2008

The Future Comments

Rating: 5.0

What does the future hold for us?
Smog filled skies and poison cars,
And broken land with useless dust
And nature’s beauty behind bars.
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rakesh rampariya
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Sujit Kumar Bharti 04 July 2021

Nice

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Jyoti 11 December 2018

Pls tell us that whats the meaning of the poem of one one para

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Chitra - 30 January 2009

a poerful theme with eaullay powerful images to paint it

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Alison Cassidy 06 January 2009

Your fine words WILL make a difference Rakesh. A bold, courageous theme penned with some original images that impress. In particular: 'And nature’s beauty behind bars.' 'But when today is yesterday, ' love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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*Trusting You* 18 December 2008

What does the future hold for us? Smog filled skies and poison cars, And broken land with useless dust And nature’s beauty behind bars. this is so well put... very well done. I could not agree more. so much truth in this. great job. Becca

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