The Furious Wind - Tanka Comments

All succumb to its power......brilliantly penned....thank u....

Lovely piece.....love to read it time and again....

The wind is furious And it is whistling so loud A magical song

part1 This high-quality type of poems is called simple and abstaining, because its language use to be easy, but going deeper into it makes us say that it is deep and not easy.

part2 if we deal with the nature in appropriate ways and respectfully that is fine, but if nature is angry, it has reasons. This metaphor in poetry makes it more valuable. For example, a human whistles and gets angry,

part3 but the excellent poet here gives these qualities to nature because she is closer to nature and knows its language and essence. well done for this preciouse gem Dear poet Rose

All succumb to its power.....significant.

Indeed we sll submit to the power of wind as mindmill or sailing a boat or bringing dark clouds sometimes they make us fly in wind like in hurricane. Good thought.

Excellent and very precise, but 100% true.

The furious wind and the magical song make a brilliant Tanka dear Rose.....

As you described this Tanka about The Furious Wind I can feel how strong the movings are, a true powerful Tanka 5 Stars full