Friday, February 17, 2006

The Funeral (She Is Not Dead) Comments

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How can we mourn her passing when
She sits
As she has always sat
In her chair by the window.
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Sally King
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Dan Brown 23 February 2006

Hey.... I'm not sure what more I can say. Well done for posting this and just wow. Again, the way you read it, makes it FEEL so strong as well as sound it. The description is amazing, I know I unwittingly built the scene in my head, how it looked, smelled and felt. Very impressive, you certainly have no reason to hide this away! Dan x

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