Sunday, November 20, 2016

The Funeral Home Comments

Rating: 5.0

the old cat is silent sleeping
the old man is slowly creeping
a painting on the wall a mountain
beyond a young man near a fountain
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Mj Lemon 20 November 2016

Community and communion...this poem has a calming effect. Very well done.

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R Soos 20 November 2016

Thank you sir. That was written when I was 12 years old. I didn't have a camera, so I took word snapshots in my journal.

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Passaic, NJ USA
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