He’s now gone forever,
With his memories scattered wherever,
Seemed flowing down the river,
Along the valley of unknown
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It is a very scenario you pictured here in this well penned and realistic write! This is a heart touching write that really moved me, since my mother died 3 years ago and my father also passed away last July 15 and to make matter even sadder, I just got the news that an uncle died the 15th of this month! But we must find the strength in the Mighty One above and keep moving on! Some go first and we then follow! An impressive and thought provoking write! 10+++ Keep it up! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City...
hey.....i dunno wot to say.>! i feel sorry for it......and as a poem, it flows just lyk tht...good one..! ~! ...pls check ma poems too and comment on them....help me improve....tc.!
this poem has a lot of soul and pain but most of all it has heart through a differcal time
Very gud........i like it