Friday, June 14, 2013

The Fun Loving Zombies Comments

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The body is frozen and then gets rotten when the soul leaves,
But the body is still hot and feels the pain,
When one is dead due to failures,
Though these ‘dead people’ wander around,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Danny Draper 14 June 2013

Interesting write, long live the zombies.

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R.j. Wynn 14 June 2013

Love the title and message too, good one

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 14 June 2013

Gah gosh i so enjoyd dis quirky fantastic poem. Yeah d dead do feel d pain til they cool off n turn cold. Dis was otherworldly netherworldly.

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Vishal Sharma 14 June 2013

wow got something new to read charming and a path to judge my poems what i say more if i say more its like a dog barking on the moon.

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