Monday, June 29, 2020

The Fun House Hospital Comments

Rating: 5.0

Nurses fasten the wet paper maché jackets
On the backs of their raggedy Ann dolls
Holding a chunk of lightning in one hand
And a crystal mirror in the other
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Kevin Patrick
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 July 2020

A poem of great depth and compelling imagery A very detailed and brilliant description of a world we never want to tread Depression and insanity have invaded humanity. The times of uncertainty can sometimes make a way to this darkness. Beautifully crafted.

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Richard Wlodarski 01 July 2020

An excellent write about depression and insanity. Reminisces of One Flew Over The Cuckoos Nest. Thank you, Kevin!

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