Wednesday, July 18, 2012

The Fuel Of My Soul Comments

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I put away my phone
Don't want to be disturbed, just want to be alone
I walk to my favorite place
I take my time, I slowly pace
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Ashley Dias
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Godfrey Morris 18 July 2012

Lovely write Ashley.

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Robin Bennett 18 July 2012

Hi Ashley, I really think you have a nice good strong poem working here. I like the format. The rhyme was good, not overbearing to take away from your words in anyway. I did love the last stanza and I am of the school that believes in a great opening and a strong close! I must say I loved what I read! Can you return the favor and reply to one of mine? I'd appreciate it. It only my second day. Thanks Robin If you want me to look at any others just send me a message. I love to read almost as much as I love to write!

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Ashley Dias

Ashley Dias

Victoria, Seychelles
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