The Fuel Of My Soul Comments

Lovely write Ashley.

Hi Ashley, I really think you have a nice good strong poem working here. I like the format. The rhyme was good, not overbearing to take away from your words in anyway. I did love the last stanza and I am of the school that believes in a great opening and a strong close! I must say I loved what I read! Can you return the favor and reply to one of mine? I'd appreciate it. It only my second day. Thanks Robin If you want me to look at any others just send me a message. I love to read almost as much as I love to write!