Thursday, October 17, 2013

The Fruits Of Crime Comments

Rating: 4.7

Warn your children not to eat
or touch the fruit when raw
but processed flesh proves sweet enough
for those within the law
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Barney Rooney
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Chinedu Dike 21 January 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful creation written in persuasive expressions with conviction. Thanks for sharing, Barney.

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Ernest Makuakua 02 March 2016

wonderful poem thanks for sharing i enjoyed reading keep writing

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Nima Foroughi 09 December 2015

I really enjoy it.Thanks for sharing.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 13 June 2015

I think I know what you are saying. (It's the class divide,)

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David Harris 29 July 2014

An excellent read. Very clever. Just a hint of cynicism? Ha ha.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 15 November 2013

A parody poem pennd in a scintillating style on law order police n crime. What a poetic rhymin twist. Pls do review any of my latest poems too.

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