Thursday, August 2, 2012

The Frontier Comments

Rating: 4.0

Two battles lost since one joined all.
The transformation that took place
arose around a pre-emptive call.
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Dylan Dowrick
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Justin Reamer 07 August 2012

It's a pretty good poem, I guess. It describes war pretty well, I must say, and it is easily understandable. The rhythm is clear, so you did a good job. Good job, my friend. You did well. Keep on writing.

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