Friday, May 20, 2016

The Frog And The Tarantula Comments

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A frog and a tarantula is an unusual pair,
In a hole up a tree they're happy to share.
The dotted humming frog has poisonous skin,
So he's safe from succumbing to his hairy kin.
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Stephen Katona
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Bri Edwards 11 July 2016

i THOUGHT the title sounded familiar!

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Bri Edwards 23 May 2016

SE Peru is a bit too far.... if one walks (got no car) . And if I sat on a hill of ants.... I'd suffer bites inside my pants.... UNLESS, I too, got a tarantula...., but maybe it's a bad idea. Duh! ! ! Well done poem and interesting poet's note. Thanks. I really enjoyed rhyming, especially eggs/dregs. But rhyming would have been tough in last couplet if they lived in Zambia; you got lucky. To MyPoemList. Bri Welcome back. :)

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Stephen Katona 24 May 2016

Thank you Bri, you've succeeded in making me laugh again. I really am lucky they don't live in Zambia. I would recommend putting the frog rather than the tarantula in your pants whilst sat on your hill otherwise you might just be adding to the number of your bites. ;)

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Doc Banks 20 May 2016

Beautifully written. I can almost envisage this wonderful partnership from the depths of the Perivisn forests..❤️

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 May 2016

Very very wonderful sharing.....10

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