Friday, January 21, 2022

The Frog And The Crow Comments

Rating: 4.7

The frog sat by the peaceful pond
and marveled at the frilly frond
but said nothing.
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Cowboy Ron Williams
COMMENTS
Belle Wassermeister 09 August 2024

I had to laugh at the last line! Excellent play on words. Enjoyed this poem immensely!

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Bri Edwards 23 January 2022

Though Kim alluded to 'play on words', he did not say 'croaked' can mean both 'died' and 'made a frog sound' (like 'bow wow' for a dog. ;) bri

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Bri Edwards 23 January 2022

FINALLY PH allows me to comment. I love this; it's almost as good as, but shorter than, my poem......

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Bharati Nayak 22 January 2022

Not to be as as naive as a frog, as there are clever crows who would not give you a chance!

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 22 January 2022

Excellent poem. Just wonderful.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 22 January 2022

A delightful poem of the frog and crow with rhyming melody. Thank you Ron. Enjoyed reading it.....10

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Unnikrishnan E S 22 January 2022

A beautiful poem with great rhyme and rhythm.Lovely story.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 22 January 2022

Enjoyed this poem immersely

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Kim Barney 21 January 2022

Excellent play on words, since 'croaked' has more than one meaning!

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Sandra Feldman 21 January 2022

So well written, enjoyed!

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Sandra Feldman 21 January 2022

Not even Aesop's fables, would have been this sad! However, very clever play on words, ' he just croked'

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