The Frigate Bird From My Past Comments

I agree with my friend Jerry, it is an intriguing piece. I enjoyed the other one better, but this is up to your usual mastery. I'm always impressed...as you know, I have a difficult time with rhyme...it's always a little offbeat - go figure! You make it look so easy, Haines, Jr.

Intriguing piece of writing Mein F, it held my attention to the end. Says a lot coming from someone who doesn't usually read narrative poetry. Excellent!