Thursday, November 23, 2017

The Friends In Three Scenes Comments

Rating: 5.0

for Baharak

There is an immense wall
between us. We can hear
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Daniel Brick
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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 November 2017

Friendship is beautiful and this rests on mutual understanding. Although we have little thin gap still we understand life very well. In the shelter of green field flowering trees with huge green leaves delicate mind in the bank of silver stream. Nice imagery this poem carries. We can hear far above the roar of the King's chariots. Excellently penned! ..10

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