Don't know if its me or you who started first...
Coz i thought the friendship we had was free of rust.
The time we spent, the moments we cheered...
But few misunderstandings and everyone feared.
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a very beautiful poems, , tramsparent towards emotions........., , , i wish that aal true friend should stay togeather always n never get seperated.............although the poem was really good.. i also invite u to read mine.........
When the mind was under the reign of ego... And i never supposed you would just go. What did you do man...what did you do! ! ! ! This line is just *perfect* and I never supposed you would just go..... Thats the theme n the line that touched my heart.... Friends are important, friends are must Play safe, this relations built on trust..... The way u started...building the scenario n the way u ended it with the sweet msg n regret..... A perfectionist... Loved this... :)
Stop! Stop! Stop! Stop! Stop! Stop! OOOOOOOOOOh dear friend you shouldn't have written the wxplanation. This poem was just fantastic. Anybody can understand it. You have written your poem in pure words and it shows that your soul has learnt to understand the way friends should be treated. This is a well composed poem. You have used a poetic language and every line contains poetic qualities. Nice Sahil. I liked the rhyming lines. I wish your friend read it and return to you.
I wish your friendship revives again... Trust me I had goosebumps while reading this poem... it is so true to the heart... I could feel the emotion.. the pain.. Wonderful writing! !
I hope and wish you rekindle your friendship with that special friend you so miss and need, well written poem. Siya_! !
A remarkable rhymin poem with wish of renewal of friendship. Dis ought to touch d friend.
True friendship lasts forever. You will get her back someday or other. Beautiful write
people always get the true value of things when they loose it..but if we ask for something with true heart we always get it and after reading your poem sir i am pretty sure you'll get your wish done for sure.....a lovely heartfelt poem thank you for sharing love payal
really emotional, regretful and true.........................true friends are a real treasure :)
..ur.poems have essence of true emotions, that wonderfully bring out powerful thoughts, great wrk dear...