Tuesday, December 10, 2019

The Free Man In Chain Comments

Rating: 4.5

Many wise men who came to meet it wondered too,
Predetermined or freely in our weak hands?
Do you even care at all, or you're just cool?
The solution is just returning to the sand?
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Abekah Emmanuel
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Khairul Ahsan 31 March 2020

'Yet men embrace sin, shunning away from the light' - that's an inbuilt frailty of men. Some can return to piety, some cannot.

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Kingsley Egbukole 10 December 2019

Beautiful title and wonderful write up deserving a 10++. Please kindly check my poem HOPE and THE BEAUTY OF DEATH.

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Abekah Emmanuel

Abekah Emmanuel

Ghana, Eastern Region,
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