Friday, May 9, 2014

The Fragrance Blest. Comments

Rating: 4.7

Lotus, whose sapless roots
Deep in stream’s muddy soul,
When lost the mossy bond below
Is turned gray in deeper gloom.
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Tajudeen Shah
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Ramesh Rai 23 September 2014

I agree with fellow poets. Thanks for share.

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Shahzia Batool 14 May 2014

Symbolists and transcendentalists have been teaching human beings in terms of such deep expressions...regarding the ultimate future of man...no arrogance will help in the end...only those will have a smooth ride who keep an eye on the last journey by treading on the paths of life carefully! ! !

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Dinesan Madathil 14 May 2014

A poem that gives a sketch of things trShahztly traversing our minds often. The touch of a Victorian soul searching is felt here, a fine poem Shaji. Thanks a lot for your analytical comments on my poems.You are someone very deep within sir.

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Neela Nath Das 10 May 2014

A wise poem..........................Loved.

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Valsa George 09 May 2014

When is lost that fragrance blest We are, but a fetid maggots’ feast. Great lines that make us sit and ponder.... After all life is fleeting like a lotus that withers once it is severed from the water base... Man's body once separated from the soul is just a heap of rancid mass of flesh... food for maggots and worms! Powerful write!

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