The air was so crisp
And cold, we could hardly
Breathe, for it froze our lungs.
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Nice job, Scarlett. While most of the poem is highly descriptive, it seems as if your main point is in the last stanza, so Lunatic Prayer is wrong. Larry
yes Scarlett it's not much fun to be a fox is it...well written piece thanks for sharing it...Fi
A timely reminder of the sad reality lurking behind so many of our brightly colored national rituals. You should read Roald Dahl's Fantastic Mr. Fox - if you haven't already. It's a great read - as is this fine poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥