Friday, March 7, 2008

The Fourth Comments

Rating: 4.3

found you, july, on the beach
the sun-glazed-protection slicked across your skin.
the water spotted breeze poked holes
through your cream white skirt
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Floyd Crenshaw
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David Desantis 18 April 2008

very beautiful.....great imagery, good phrasing and a powerful clincher at the end. good job

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LOVEFOOL Aka 07 March 2008

Another very well written poem with some great phrases and lots of meaning well done

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